Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Good Morning Manila Comments

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I pulled up an errant leg from bedside
Back into the safety of the mosquito net
Digging a pointer finger nail into a swelling spot
The itch made more cumbersome by the summer heat
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Eddie Roa
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Inday Prising 30 July 2009

you squeeze local colors in this poem marvelously..you manage to draw a clear image of the city of manila..really good write.,

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