Good Morning (Haunted Visions) Comments

So hate me please and leave me alone Or love me baby and please come home Either way The end result is fine whatever you decide. I liked the first two of these lines, but please forgive me do, the next does not ring true, the difference is massive, and it is not the way to win an old flame back to you. A rewrite might decidedly change the point of view?

I like this poem..its so much in taunt and all but this is a haunt. i adore it evn though im young....so my opinion might not care