Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, December 13, 2013

Good Morning Comments

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“Good morning” smilingly went to her
She was not known to me ad completely stranger
I was daily traveling as railway passenger
She too was always with me as co-traveler
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2013

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Lovely poem.. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2013

nice poem Nathan Luke1 minute ago I dont like the last line seems forced Comment 0 a chance encounter on a commuter train,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2013

Chris Nelson2 minutes ago rhyming could be better.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 December 2013

red rose is love symbol, good write, thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2013

“Good morning” smilingly went to her She was not known to me ad completely stranger

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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