I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn
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Nice depiction of Aurora at dawn...last stanza is the highlight...5*****
I open the door and breathe the air Fragrance from foliages enter into me Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair I open the door to welcome the morning rays. in india you enjoy it since it is on eqator. but we who are far away suffer when cold dark, mornings greet us. thank you dear Tiku. You are blessed to enjoy all this. tony
Your beautiful poem shows the importance of taking the time to savor the wonders the Lord has wrought.
Such a lovely poem Dear Sir! Beautiful imagery, an ideal day; beautiful sceneries and starts with prays and the diurnal course. The refrain, " I open the window.., " comes out with beautiful and spelly pictures. I really loved reading the poem. It's not 'Good Morning', it's great morning.
Thanks very much my friend for your precious comment. My gratitude.
I open the door to welcome the ray That has come down from heaven Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray how wonderful this nice piece of work it is? a precious poem written by professional poet, very good.. it deserves 10/10 always
Such a beautiful poem. The glory of dawn emanating from each word sprinkling love and appreciation for nature and its creator. A perfect 10
A beautiful sensational poem. A marvelous expression.
I open the window to watch the hillThe halo of light hovers over its headLike a sage in deep penance it is sitting still What a fascinating imagery! ....10
We open the door to a new working day? Interesting write. Regards. Sally
Verily, morning and poetry are lovely complimentary to each other
I open the doors and windows and say A prayer in His glory who created this all Before I would get lost in my works for the day.............I join you in the prayers. What a lovely poem!
a lovely appreciative poem of being alive to greet a new sunrise? .............well written
Good Morning- A marvelous piece of poetry. It goes into my favourite list. Real joy to read. Thanks. I open the door to welcome the ray That has come down from heaven A prayer in His glory who created this all
Thanks everyone for taking time to read this poem and giving comments. Appreciated.
I loved this poem. It makes us appreciate the daybreak of each day. Thanks for sharing.
anil, in this poem you remind us that morning can refresh us. you might be interested to read my poem snail mornings which shares much of the ideas and feelings. -glen kappy
A sweet song that is spendid in its spirituallity!
Very subtile and finest poem from a good heart,5 Stars full on TOP, Anil Sir, though time has elapsed, your poems remain and become immortal, love is immortal
That is a great compliment. Honored. Regards.