Sun is brightly shining;
Birds are happ'ly singing:
'Wake up and live now Juneil,
Mind never the rocky hills,
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Sun luminates over me, Exposing my identity; Allowing me not to hide From the world's uncordial side, But urges me to fight For my one and only right, And that is to win the game To stand tall with my name. I'm awake and fin'lly see The fair things happening to me. Thank you Lord, Good morning to me. --------- Good morning philippines! ! ! Lolz! this is a nice written poem my friend...well done. Finely structured and formed...Great! ! ! ! ! ! !
This is an appealing and first class verse my friend - and the phrase towards the end 'to stand tall with my name' is inspired.......... if we can all do that today we shall have achieved.......10 and more for this....... Fay...10 + ++
what a lovely poem, lines embodied with a prayer.... may you have more poems; i wish to reflect...it’s a poet of a dreamer of what is genuine in the eye of God and of the heart of man....God bless