Half cup sleepy
Pre-dawn
Three teaspoons
Silvered dew
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Two cups slanting Sunlight..............................unique flow with rare metaphors corsed from nature`s blue, i really appreciate, thanks
Thanks! I needed a good morning poem. Its late afternoon and I was feeling more tired now than I did when I woke up. Poetry and coffee... a good way of waking up. Nice write. Zen
Well Good morning to you Elysabeth! Thanx for the FuN imagery full message! Take care of U............((Smile)) =Shelley=
This one is chockablock with feeling - all of it good natured. Just enough words, too. Perfect poem. love, Allie xxxx
Thank you! I needed that, along with copious amounts of coffee. t x
Really enjoyed this poem and although you have too many to comment on all, I like your chosen style. This one caught my interest because it reminded me of one of mine called O Night. You might like. Adeline