Thursday, September 20, 2007

Good Morning! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Half cup sleepy
Pre-dawn
Three teaspoons
Silvered dew
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elysabeth faslund
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Adeline Foster 18 July 2008

Really enjoyed this poem and although you have too many to comment on all, I like your chosen style. This one caught my interest because it reminded me of one of mine called O Night. You might like. Adeline

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 October 2007

Two cups slanting Sunlight..............................unique flow with rare metaphors corsed from nature`s blue, i really appreciate, thanks

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Zen Bojczuk 03 October 2007

Thanks! I needed a good morning poem. Its late afternoon and I was feeling more tired now than I did when I woke up. Poetry and coffee... a good way of waking up. Nice write. Zen

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Meggie Gultiano 03 October 2007

From me, to you..a very good morning.. hugs, Meggie

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Uloia Norris Moore 29 September 2007

Thank you from me as well doodle do :)

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 28 September 2007

Well Good morning to you Elysabeth! Thanx for the FuN imagery full message! Take care of U............((Smile)) =Shelley=

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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2007

This one is chockablock with feeling - all of it good natured. Just enough words, too. Perfect poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Thank you! I needed that, along with copious amounts of coffee. t x

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Yen Cress 20 September 2007

Nice! I can almost taste it!

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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