Good Morning Comments

Oh, how much I loved this, Onelia: take your morning gown and join me on the terrace to watch the dawn yet in a veil - yes that's when God pays us a visit incognito to stir our hearts to fly upwards and meet him in mid-air that he may slowly bring us back to earth to be bathed in the fresh dews of gardens in delight. Oh, this is so good. Mark

You really watched the dawn that comes suprisingly. Wonderful imagery.10++

On the terrace to watch the dawn..very simple and realistic.Thank you Onelia

You transport me directly to this lovely landscape in early dawn, the sounds and the atmosphere, with your clear, simple words. Beautiful!

nice imagery you created...good poem..

'Take your morning gown and join me on the terrace to watch the dawn...' a poem impressively dawns...thanx for the invitation...thanx for sharing

how very picturesque i was instantly teleported to the blissful terrace.

Ah, good! GOOD MORNING is here at last! You tell me people tell you that when the fog rolls in like this...it is God(incogninto) ...visiting the earth, Even Heaven must get boring every now and then and then God(for his own good) takes his dog for a walk in Proveance. Looks over your shoulder as you write and is pleased to see you write well...of Him. On the balacony you draw your dressing gown tighter 'round you...shiver...smile...& sip your tea. And now that image lives in me! love Donall Donall

The natural elements are welcome in this poem of environment. They introduce to the divine visit. They introduce to a visit of a fatherly figure that hides in the fog. The fog of the past?

It's also said that the face of God moves upon the waters...but I like your image better...it does seem a good morning...Coach

What a beautiful morning it is! Beautiful poem, demanding coffee out of doors. Fx

The essense of province is indeed rather godlike - being able to sense it is a privilege, being able to express it a blessing. Rgds, Ivan

A pleasant morning to you too...lovely piece a very positive point of view... Cate