Monday, April 15, 2013

Good Habits Comments

Rating: 4.0

Get up early in the morning
For being fit and healthy its a warning

Saying all the prayers is the way
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Hira Akhtar
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Qurat ul Ain Khan. 14 September 2021

What is the figure of speech in this poem?

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Jafia 23 May 2018

Something more is required but still good

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Anmol Kumar 30 January 2016

Aa

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Hira Akhtar 03 April 2014

thanks sir for being kind :)

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Akhtar Jawad 01 April 2014

A good poem, capable of inclusion in primary school syllabus.

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Usman Arshad 29 December 2013

Also mom instructions on morning walk

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Usman Arshad 29 December 2013

Apply good habbits on yourself like early to rise and always keep smiling

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Bri Edwards 20 August 2013

Stomache'll never get out of order, can say it surely..... Stomach'll...... you have some good ideas for leading a good life. proofread (maybe more than once) to avoid silly mistakes like: gget and copmany //////////////get///////company. :)

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Yasmin Khan 01 May 2013

It expresses your mature thoughts at immature age but wisdom is nothing to do with age, well-done Hira the last verse is great.

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