Tuesday, November 8, 2005

Good Guy Lost Comments

Rating: 2.6

Embraced in the rythm of an eye closing hug,
Standing on the front porch and the welcome rug,
Is where I left you after a mine blowing night,
Of discovery of laughter of doing what is right,
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Richard Stilwell
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Patricia Grantham 16 July 2015

By doing what was right maybe the good guy will be found. Enjoyed your poem very much.

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Lyn Paul 16 July 2015

The Good guy can win, there can still be a happy ending. Thank you

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Stuart Mason 08 November 2005

I like this, especially the first two lines; the syntax is perfect and the image vivid. And, hey, i think it's something that goes through all our minds.

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Richard Stilwell

Richard Stilwell

Mooresville, North Carolina
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