Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Good Godzilla Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wish all day
That I was small
I turn to fast
And things just fall, away
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Tailor Bell
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Bri Edwards 21 November 2019

line 3: use " too" Poor Godzilla! ! bri :)

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Chuck Audette 12 June 2009

Great poem. Poor Godzilla! So misunderstood! -chuck

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

i like it wow u amazing

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ngaio beck 30 August 2008

Ah Yes.Let's all go back to the primordial tidal pools and maybe this time we'll get lucky.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 27 April 2008

...rarely one might be tempted to call anything 'giant', or anything about giants, or a Godzilla for this matter, justifiedly as being cute. Maybe just with your nice little poem comes the unknown exemption...

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Risha : Ahmed 18 July 2007

An excellent poem this! Loved it.

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Not a member No 4 08 January 2007

Tailor, you did well to put yourself inside this big clumsy guy. Are we talking entanglements in power cables here? 'electric apprehension' or taser(?) guns in the hands of the police? Another really entertaining piece of writing. Yeh, you should be in comedy! ! jim (End count - last line - 'to speak with control'. I thought this was such an emotional affair you couldn't speak, but it was to mission 'control'?)

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Melvina Germain 21 November 2006

Once again, excellent Tailor, a wonderful write, I like it very much.--Melvina--

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Russel Tanner 09 November 2006

Thought-provoking - keep it up Russ

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Esther Leclerc 10 October 2006

The first stanza could stand alone, but the rest of it makes the whole - and hey, don't forget poor Geethra! Just watched Godzilla, the original and U.S. versions, the other night.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 06 October 2006

dear tailor, you should be writing scripts for cartoon films.

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Patricia Gale 09 September 2006

Knew a gent like this, gentle as could be. Thanks for the remembrance of him.

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Chuck Audette 29 August 2006

Great poem. I'd like to write more, but I hear my Mothra calling... -chuck

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Barbara James 16 August 2006

Cute Poem, Tailor. I think you are very talented

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Brian Dorn 16 August 2006

Tailor, a unique and clever write... I'm sure it would be a huge hit in Japan! ! Different, but very well done! ! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2006

There is something really captivating in this one, Awesome My favourite part: Build up courage To come to town My clumsy ways Just make the locals frown Love duncan XXX

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Declan McHenry 01 August 2006

Aw, come on! Knock those buildings down! A neat piece though comrade.

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