I wish all day
That I was small
I turn to fast
And things just fall, away
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Ah Yes.Let's all go back to the primordial tidal pools and maybe this time we'll get lucky.
...rarely one might be tempted to call anything 'giant', or anything about giants, or a Godzilla for this matter, justifiedly as being cute. Maybe just with your nice little poem comes the unknown exemption...
Tailor, you did well to put yourself inside this big clumsy guy. Are we talking entanglements in power cables here? 'electric apprehension' or taser(?) guns in the hands of the police? Another really entertaining piece of writing. Yeh, you should be in comedy! ! jim (End count - last line - 'to speak with control'. I thought this was such an emotional affair you couldn't speak, but it was to mission 'control'?)
Once again, excellent Tailor, a wonderful write, I like it very much.--Melvina--
The first stanza could stand alone, but the rest of it makes the whole - and hey, don't forget poor Geethra! Just watched Godzilla, the original and U.S. versions, the other night.
dear tailor, you should be writing scripts for cartoon films.
Knew a gent like this, gentle as could be. Thanks for the remembrance of him.
Great poem. I'd like to write more, but I hear my Mothra calling... -chuck
Tailor, a unique and clever write... I'm sure it would be a huge hit in Japan! ! Different, but very well done! ! Brian
There is something really captivating in this one, Awesome My favourite part: Build up courage To come to town My clumsy ways Just make the locals frown Love duncan XXX
Aw, come on! Knock those buildings down! A neat piece though comrade.
line 3: use " too" Poor Godzilla! ! bri :)