Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, April 13, 2014

Good Friends Comments

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We were best friends ever
It seemed we will separate never
We used to remain together
We were daily going out to loiter
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Agree wholeheartedly with the last stanza - good friends should remain so whatever may happen. A wise write. 13 Apr by Fay Slimm | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

good job. enjoyable swedishpoet.20 minutes ago clever word choice and a well metered rhyme, nicely done today

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

We were best friends ever It seemed we will separate never

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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