Poetfreak comments:
Beautifully written and constructed. This is very deep and profound
23 Apr 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply
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x..........very beautiful, my dear friend Elena :) ....and the very best friend in this story is the owl...cause he did the right thing and walked away...so no one can blame him.... cause deer is in the jail, or cause crow was bad and flew away, without paying for his mistake....I love this write...and feel it should be read to every child and grownup...lol...a most fabulous write, my friend...I truly enjoyed it...will be reading this one again, someday soon in the immediate future ★
23 Apr 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply
A fable with a moral that we should all take to heart, Elena. No, the crow is less than a good friend, and should be characterized as temptation. The deer succumbed, unfortunately, though the owl remained true to his values and morals.
23 Apr 2015 by Nígh†mµ†€ | Reply
A poem with a moral written well and with deep meaning
23 Apr 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply
Awww really good gold ink....totally awesome...tfs darling xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings
23 Apr 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply
A brilliant piece of story telling Elena...thank you for this well written moral tale
23 Apr 2015 by.. magnolia | Reply
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xA fabulous fable of faltering morality. A deep morality tale told with great simplicity, straight and to the point. A needed reminder for many-worthy, indeed of thinking on
23 Apr 2015 by Joseph Anderson | Reply
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Totally delightful, Elena. This story could indeed be told to young children, who would understand easily, and accept it as a fairy tale, but with meaning to their own lives. I'm sure they would have a good discussion afterwards, and learn from it.
26 Apr 2015 by Erik 99 | Reply
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Poetfreak comments: Beautifully written and constructed. This is very deep and profound 23 Apr 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x..........very beautiful, my dear friend Elena :) ....and the very best friend in this story is the owl...cause he did the right thing and walked away...so no one can blame him.... cause deer is in the jail, or cause crow was bad and flew away, without paying for his mistake....I love this write...and feel it should be read to every child and grownup...lol...a most fabulous write, my friend...I truly enjoyed it...will be reading this one again, someday soon in the immediate future ★ 23 Apr 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply A fable with a moral that we should all take to heart, Elena. No, the crow is less than a good friend, and should be characterized as temptation. The deer succumbed, unfortunately, though the owl remained true to his values and morals. 23 Apr 2015 by Nígh†mµ†€ | Reply A poem with a moral written well and with deep meaning 23 Apr 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply Awww really good gold ink....totally awesome...tfs darling xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 23 Apr 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply A brilliant piece of story telling Elena...thank you for this well written moral tale 23 Apr 2015 by.. magnolia | Reply picture of Joseph Anderson xA fabulous fable of faltering morality. A deep morality tale told with great simplicity, straight and to the point. A needed reminder for many-worthy, indeed of thinking on 23 Apr 2015 by Joseph Anderson | Reply picture of Erik 99 Totally delightful, Elena. This story could indeed be told to young children, who would understand easily, and accept it as a fairy tale, but with meaning to their own lives. I'm sure they would have a good discussion afterwards, and learn from it. 26 Apr 2015 by Erik 99 | Reply