Thursday, April 17, 2014

Good Feelings Comments

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It pains me most
When man cheats or
Physically or mentally
Hurts a fellow man.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Gajanan Mishra 18 April 2014

matters to have good feeling, I like it, thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 April 2014

Thank you poet Dan Reynolds, I have made the change as suggested. It sounds better now.

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Dan Reynolds 17 April 2014

You have important grammatical mistake. Are obstacles to bring should be Are obstacles to bringing

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