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Oh dear friend, moon is shining
Waking the heart from deep slumber
would you not tell me your love story
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love is immortal in the ages and eons entwined Rachel Ann Butler
a wonderful visual cognitive metaphor: ''as beauty thy love is woman ensemble bud still fails to bloom when veiled lotus still withdraw its petal as intoned'' well written poem...10++
Capturing one's heart with LOVE...i could feel a great love of work in your poem...a 10+
A fascinating and capturing poem of love Dr. Kar! ! Elegant for sure! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
Passionate love revealed in the heart for all occasions, most astounding poet