Good Day! Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Good Day!

Rating: 5.0


I'm feeling
not well within
heart and head
aching unstopped.

I expected you
in the last train
But, the schedule cancelled.

I'm feeling
not well within.

I expected
the night
with the angel
in a paradise
But,
I'd to sleep
with the monster
in the cactus garden
spiny wind blowing
all around.

I'm feeling
not well
within.

Me,
upset
at work place
upset
at a free ride
upset
at the dining
upset even
at the movie romantic.

The skilled tailor
with no blurred pupil
is failed
every time
passing through the needle
the thread of target
gets wounded.

I'm feeling
not well
within.

I expected
my son to
top the tournament
bagging the gold
But,
was out badly
in a scandal.

I expected
to be in north
But,
was doomed to south.

I expected
a spring
with singing colors
But, it was
a scorching April
the cruelest ever.

I expected
a good day
But,
It was a nightmare
threatening me all night.

I'm feeling
not well
within
the heart and head
aching unstopped.

Monday, October 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 30 October 2017

I expected a spring with singing colors But, it was a scorching April the cruelest ever.i enjoy your poem.Thanks sir for the shairing....10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2017

Expectations dissected and narrated in a subtle way.. Enjoyed your poem...10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 October 2017

I expected a spring with singing colors But, it was a scorching April the cruelest ever. Lovely poem shared with such artistic skill. Thanks Sir for the sharing. 10+++ for it.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 30 October 2017

Thanks sir for nice words.I always wait from you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2017

Such a heartwarming poem, Binaya..10++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 30 October 2017

Great gratitude for you read and appreciated the poem from a poet like you.I loved with great love.keep reading me sir Thanks Binaya

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