Thursday, September 14, 2006

Good Clean Fun Comments

Rating: 5.0

She scrubs the floor on hands and knees
Nor thinks to take a moment's ease.
She dusts and waxes varnished wood
And wipes the mirrors as she should.
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Yen Cress
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Barbara Haskell 13 January 2008

I laughed out loud at the end! A good surprise, not even where I thought the poem was going! ! Barbara

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joey oo 29 September 2006

Hello again Yen, loved the 'twist in the tail (or is that tale?) to this bit of good clean fun... Take care. Joey

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jack russell 14 September 2006

Very witty and clever, Yen....absolutely love it! Hope the milkman doesn't know! ! I also hope you draw the line before you start cleaning the windows? A pleasure to read, and look forward to more :) Jack.

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