Thursday, April 17, 2008

Good Catch Comments

Rating: 3.0


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Original Unknown Girl 30 June 2009

This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx

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R.k Das 07 May 2009

i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

a succinct poem..dreamcatcher...wonderful imagery

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

A composition of a dream, an image of love.10..

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Janice Windle 04 September 2008

Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.

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Coach Roth 02 July 2008

Wonderful snapshot of a moment with so much more unsaid...beautiful...Coach

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My liking for One is known. Nicely I notice this symbol of man caught in a fishing net. This author is communicative and deserved an Ode.

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Marvin Brato 21 May 2008

A poem so short but full of substantial imaginations! A 10.

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R H 15 May 2008

A dreamy write that captures a moment of tenderness in 4 succinct but poetic lines. justine.

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Original Unknown Girl 29 April 2008

Mmm... sounds like a Mer-man! Love it! HG; -) xx

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Roger Cornish 22 April 2008

Caught me! Lovely poem O.... Rogerx

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Flora Gillingham 17 April 2008

Your dreamcatcher, mancatcher pillow! Happy hunting, One! F

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 April 2008

yet the marvel alone simlply dazzling over blue dreams when splendoured unequalled across the sweetness of the soul...............a unique poem by the luscious green with ingenuity, i do simply adfmire the way you paints the atr by the softness with gentle words, great write, it demands 10+, thanks dear Onlia for sharing

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Ivan Donn Carswell 17 April 2008

Less a victim - more a willing sacrifice is my guess. Delicious. Rgds, Ivan

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