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i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,
Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.
Wonderful snapshot of a moment with so much more unsaid...beautiful...Coach
My liking for One is known. Nicely I notice this symbol of man caught in a fishing net. This author is communicative and deserved an Ode.
A dreamy write that captures a moment of tenderness in 4 succinct but poetic lines. justine.
Your dreamcatcher, mancatcher pillow! Happy hunting, One! F
yet the marvel alone simlply dazzling over blue dreams when splendoured unequalled across the sweetness of the soul...............a unique poem by the luscious green with ingenuity, i do simply adfmire the way you paints the atr by the softness with gentle words, great write, it demands 10+, thanks dear Onlia for sharing
Less a victim - more a willing sacrifice is my guess. Delicious. Rgds, Ivan
This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx