Good Bye To This World Comments

This is one of my favorite poems because it is honest and true, A lot of thanks.

Very beautiful poem dear friend..so sweet is your voice love it....

Dear Sir Poet, Such a lonely word, , , Great poem which reveals final destination of mankind. Thanks for sharing... Sincerely, diane

So nice. thanks for sharing

This is so true, good one

it is realy good poem.

this is nicely written soul watcher. sometimes i just lose hope in humanity and the world especially nowadays. but as long as there is you, me and many more of us who know what the real problems are, i think we can still look forward to a better and brighter future. kudos!

Great poem, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

a fine poem with a fine image. thanks

Wonderful work, if only humanity would take heed of your sentiments.

Wow intense thanks for sharing

I like this poem alot and I will never forget it

beautiful piece this world has turned to something else thank you for sharing keep writing im inspired

A great poem, my friend. A deep understanding of the human condition in your words.

........both the write and photo are incredible, ...great job! :) ★

A great write, Your supplication is enriched with sincerity and compassion.

This is the outburst of a noble soul who is an helpless observer of mindless bloodshed taking place all around with impunity. Very emotional portrayal. A quote: and the Jasmine gets mixed with air full of Gunpowder / Good bye to this world / when love leaves us and Bequeaths us the Misery.

This is a beautifully written poem. A poem of the miseries in this world and it does seem like injustice has become a career. Great write. Thank you, RoseAnn

This is a beautiful poem. The reality of life in that part of the world has been truthfully projected. But, as like many others have already said, saying good bye to this misery ridden world is not the solution. A collective voice raised against the sin may do some good.

it sounds like one reader thought “Good-bye to this world” was a reference to suicide as your personal or your general solution to the suffering/stress caused by hostility in the world. and I would agree that a well-planned or at least well-executed [no pun intended] suicide would be a solution. it is something I would seriously consider for myself and I wonder how many think of it but don’t’ do it because of ‘outside influence’ from religion, relatives, etc. I commend you on your use of English, though there are parts I would write a bit differently. you certainly have done a good job getting your main point(s) across, that there is a lot of misery for some in this world and it is very worrisome to some, though many become calloused as well. I found your use of capital letters (where they usually aren’t used) to be an effective tool to emphasize some words. I sometimes use all capital letters in a word in my writing. I especially liked the following lines, even though I didn’t know what “Land of love” referred to. “when the Land of love is Irrigated by bloods and the Injustice becomes a career wished to be continued good bye to this world when the rain Pours with buckshot from the sky and the Jasmine gets mixed with air full of Gunpowder” thanks for sharing. bri :) p.s. personally, i think mankind as a whole should be more concerned about overpopulation, natural disasters, lack of resources, an aging population of people to be cared for, global warming threats, pollution, etc. but, yes, the individuals are more likely to be concerned about the bullets and cheaters in their everyday lives.