Saturday, April 19, 2008

Good Bye - Orginal Comments

Rating: 5.0

You said you would love me
You said this was true
But now, matal bars is all I can see
I had no clue.
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Sophia Smith
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''king'' Troy Hazel 23 April 2008

this poem is one of the best poems i've read. GREAT. ''KING''

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Kye Kurion 19 April 2008

Ohh, abandonment is hard to deal with, very well conveyed though.

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