Thursday, October 25, 2012

Good Bye My Love Comments

Rating: 2.5

Days turned into a week
And weeks into years.
You let my eyes seek,
For your love my dear.
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Ancita Michael
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Hans Vr 25 October 2012

Strong stance nicely written in melodious verses Excellent poem

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Lyn Paul 25 October 2012

Great writing Ancita, a story told from beginning to end. Thank you

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Yash Shinde 25 October 2012

very beautifully written describes your condition well.........very well written with great rhyming scheme :)

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