Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Good Bye Grandfather Comments

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Good Bye Grandee, not leaving you alone,
Leaving behind the beauty and charms,
For you only you, nobody will share,
In our absence the care taking arms,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 29 May 2016

It is indeed wonderful to be a grandpa You have said it well. Thank you sir-10

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M Asim Nehal 26 May 2016

Love of elders are unmatched, specially by grandparents. Nicely penned, Janab.

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Nice dedication to grandfather, nice memory about grandfather. Thank you sir.

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Kelly Kurt 25 May 2016

This poem makes me hope all the more to be a grandfather before I die

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Unwritten Soul 24 May 2016

The words are just birth from the heart that really embrace of true love entity...A lovely pen by your Mr Akhtar Jawad. :) :) it is a dessert for mind and heart!

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