Good Bye Friend Poem by me poet yeps poet

Good Bye Friend

Rating: 4.2


Another great friend
I'd admired
years since we met
just a year or two senior
age wise

knowledge
beyond the far reaching crowds
passed away this morning...
left all bereft
mourning

none will remember
after the lantern
is switched off

next one please
calls the padri
who is now in queue
has anyone any clue?


none what soever
the petrichor is over
the scented candles flavor
now waver

memory swings
like a new one in a cradle
why have you brought me
just to pass away
sadly
who...will answer me?

Saturday, November 5, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: human life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.J. Lemon 08 November 2022

Very moving verse, Poet,

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me poet yeps poet 11 November 2022

YES THANKS MJL GLAD FOR YOU BE HAPPY

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me poet yeps poet 08 November 2022

Thank you so much MJ Lemon

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 06 November 2022

the world is activated in the chain of coming and passing away! it's an eternal rules of the nature! nice to read your poem after a long time

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me poet yeps poet 06 November 2022

THANKS YES I MISSED YOUR POEMS DO START ALL OVERGAIN...NOW I'm DEAF AND HALF BLIND MB OF BD

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Nosheen Irfan 06 November 2022

Heart touching poem. The death of a friend is indeed a big loss. You have captured the pain well.

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me poet yeps poet 06 November 2022

when love flows from the hear it makes friends easier..to depart.. life and death are playful ARTS

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David Wood 05 November 2022

A very touching poem. Loss of a loved one is so hard to take and their memory lives in your heart forever.

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me poet yeps poet 05 November 2022

your greatness David tnxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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