Today i say final farewell...its our traditional farewell memorial dinner for the departed soul....age old tradition.... the fortieth day of mourning
The rocky shore extended to the sea.
The town of Camarine from far we see,
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Carefully used words revealing the sorrow at loss and past memories of togetherness, what was once shared can be shared again but spritually. Life just gets mysterious and unpredictable unveiling secrets with each passing moment, amazing tribute. Newer finds and truth are only constant. Sorry for your loss.
Saadat, it is said that powerful emotions trigger the creative soul like nothing else. Surely this is the case in this beautiful tribute to your dear father. Your metric flow is flawless. The poetic style of your words, impeccable. The poem could have been penned a thousand years ago - and yet its message is timeless. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A sad and painful farewell, that of a son to his father. The end of a chapter in your life, yet the book is not finished. Your father guides you on your journey, from the other side of eternity, but still very much a part of your life. You are his legacy, and a fine one it is, Saadat. I'm sure he is very proud of the son he nurtured into a caring, compassionate human being. May he rest in peace, and may you find your peace, also. Linda
w're there with you Saadat, bidding him good journey to peace....
This beautiful poem is a wonderful tribute to your father. Wishing you a long, healthy and happy life Saadat. Ruthy
Dear Saadat... We all say farewell to your dad. I am so very glad that your dad has given such a great son to this world.. world needs people like you to make this world a beautiful place.. you father's soul will rest in peace Saadat.. love shan
may the soul of your father rest in peace, Saadat..a poem for eternity, indeed.. A.
a great tribute to your father.....may his soul rest in peace....excellent poem sir...beyond marks.
My dear, dear father, spent with age, I lost: Ease of my cares, and solace of my pain, Sav'd thro' a thousand toils, but sav'd in vain Thanks for sharing your pain of loss. You know that he will be watching you always and feeling proud of your respect for humanity.The memories of departed parents are endless treasure to share with your family and friends. 18th August,2009 Rehana Nazli
dear sadat....a beautiful tribute to your dad.may be all rituals are over, but he will be there with you, always in the heart.my condolences to you and family. ritty
I am so touched with your tribute to your father, may his soul rest in peace.
Beautifully expressed Sadat - your final farewell to your dear father..may his soul rest in peace...May Time the great healer help you to overcome this loss...
Even if the official mourning period is over. your love for him will remain, a beautiful write!
the appearance of this poem is good, , modernize used of apostrophe.. life...alpha and omega tears can't hide the feelings let the time heals the wound fot a lost...it will really come.... my condolences to you dear saadat may the ALMIGHTY ALLAH bless you all i wish you smiles after these days we love you you dear, dont worry...BISMILLAH
Stupendous written composition....well done! ! ! My condolences to you and to your family...God Bless! ! !
Sad and touching. Hope poetry here could help release the sadness. In a child's heart, too hard to say goodbye to dad. The deep love will be always there. May your dad rest in peace forever.