Sunday, August 16, 2009

Good Bye Dad Comments

Rating: 4.4

Today i say final farewell...its our traditional farewell memorial dinner for the departed soul....age old tradition.... the fortieth day of mourning

The rocky shore extended to the sea.
The town of Camarine from far we see,
...
Read full text

saadat tahir
COMMENTS
Cigeng Zhang 22 April 2016

Sad and touching. Hope poetry here could help release the sadness. In a child's heart, too hard to say goodbye to dad. The deep love will be always there. May your dad rest in peace forever.

0 0 Reply
Hannah Barton 21 December 2010

Wonderful. I thought of my dad when I read this.: (

0 0 Reply
Rinki Nandy 30 June 2010

Carefully used words revealing the sorrow at loss and past memories of togetherness, what was once shared can be shared again but spritually. Life just gets mysterious and unpredictable unveiling secrets with each passing moment, amazing tribute. Newer finds and truth are only constant. Sorry for your loss.

0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 25 December 2009

Saadat, it is said that powerful emotions trigger the creative soul like nothing else. Surely this is the case in this beautiful tribute to your dear father. Your metric flow is flawless. The poetic style of your words, impeccable. The poem could have been penned a thousand years ago - and yet its message is timeless. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

0 0 Reply
Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

...farewell! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Linda Ori 23 August 2009

A sad and painful farewell, that of a son to his father. The end of a chapter in your life, yet the book is not finished. Your father guides you on your journey, from the other side of eternity, but still very much a part of your life. You are his legacy, and a fine one it is, Saadat. I'm sure he is very proud of the son he nurtured into a caring, compassionate human being. May he rest in peace, and may you find your peace, also. Linda

0 0 Reply
Sonya Florentino 23 August 2009

w're there with you Saadat, bidding him good journey to peace....

0 0 Reply
Ruth Walters 23 August 2009

This beautiful poem is a wonderful tribute to your father. Wishing you a long, healthy and happy life Saadat. Ruthy

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 23 August 2009

Dear Saadat... We all say farewell to your dad. I am so very glad that your dad has given such a great son to this world.. world needs people like you to make this world a beautiful place.. you father's soul will rest in peace Saadat.. love shan

0 0 Reply
Yelena M. 20 August 2009

may the soul of your father rest in peace, Saadat..a poem for eternity, indeed.. A.

0 0 Reply
Vaibhav Pandey 19 August 2009

a great tribute to your father.....may his soul rest in peace....excellent poem sir...beyond marks.

0 0 Reply
Rehana Nazli 18 August 2009

My dear, dear father, spent with age, I lost: Ease of my cares, and solace of my pain, Sav'd thro' a thousand toils, but sav'd in vain Thanks for sharing your pain of loss. You know that he will be watching you always and feeling proud of your respect for humanity.The memories of departed parents are endless treasure to share with your family and friends. 18th August,2009 Rehana Nazli

0 0 Reply
Ritty Patnaik 18 August 2009

dear sadat....a beautiful tribute to your dad.may be all rituals are over, but he will be there with you, always in the heart.my condolences to you and family. ritty

0 0 Reply
Preeti Chauhan 17 August 2009

I am so touched with your tribute to your father, may his soul rest in peace.

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 16 August 2009

Beautifully expressed Sadat - your final farewell to your dear father..may his soul rest in peace...May Time the great healer help you to overcome this loss...

0 0 Reply
Ejaz Khan 16 August 2009

Even if the official mourning period is over. your love for him will remain, a beautiful write!

0 0 Reply
Lady Grace 16 August 2009

the appearance of this poem is good, , modernize used of apostrophe.. life...alpha and omega tears can't hide the feelings let the time heals the wound fot a lost...it will really come.... my condolences to you dear saadat may the ALMIGHTY ALLAH bless you all i wish you smiles after these days we love you you dear, dont worry...BISMILLAH

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 16 August 2009

Stupendous written composition....well done! ! ! My condolences to you and to your family...God Bless! ! !

0 0 Reply
saadat tahir

saadat tahir

Islamabad-Pakistan
Close
Error Success