Friday, October 3, 2008

Good Bye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Good by my dear
My time has come
For us to part
So please don’t fear
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Adam Day
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Ency Bearis 03 October 2008

lovely write... Ency Bearis

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Tia Maria 03 October 2008

ding dong ding dong...true love must hold on :) nicely optimistic 10

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Anoynomous Poet 03 October 2008

nice...luv d last 2 lines....

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Dwayne Bailey 03 October 2008

Beautiful poem and I love the last two line. Nice feeling. A 10 :)

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Sumita Datta 03 October 2008

Expressed well within few lines... good one... :)

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