Good Bye! Poem by rachel palamarcuik

Good Bye!

Rating: 5.0


The nights grow colder,
tears fill my eyes,
as i wave good bye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 22 August 2011

The night wouldn't be colder or sad tears drowning your eyes if you would a slight idea that you would be back! Excellent few words that say a lot! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more extensive talented writes! You got what it takes to make it through the Poetry World: TALENT! Glad to have you on this page! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Eric Cockrell 22 August 2011

i love this one, for what it says, and what it doesnt! well done!

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Aqeb Benazir 22 August 2011

I appreciate the msg, it's very simple and light.

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