Monday, May 2, 2011

Good Bye Comments

Rating: 5.0

The morning after we said our final good bye
What I remember is a single tear from your eye
Today it hit me that I can't call you anymore
To tell you how my day was and it's you I adore
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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