Sunday, July 12, 2009

Good-Bye! Comments

Rating: 5.0

i never say good-bye
is always see you later..

Dad when you left
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Steven Pimentel
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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

i am enjoying my time while going through your poems.....this poem was touching! ! i give it10

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 July 2009

yeah.//... your poems are sort of very poignant indeed.. you keep that aspect through out.. nice reading your poems.. i ll see you soon with love shan

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Pandian Angelina 16 July 2009

You had a dad Who showed you love And did not hide It is the care we show The love we say we have When alive which matter More than the goodbye His blessings will stay Forever with you! Angel

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

a touching poem....and you expressed it will your love to your Dad...nice write...10 (see my poem ' Always ' let me see if it will touch your heart too)

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Subroto Chatterjee 16 July 2009

A lesson in this too. Life's teaching us....constantly. Cheers. Subroto

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Louis Rams 15 July 2009

this is a heartfelt poem, because i've seen the damage that can be done when that happens. i have a poem on line called 'a dad' which you may be able to relate to this. but you put good feelings into this write. very good

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

He missed a good thing, your dad, someone very special....you! His loss! Don't look back and regret, always look forward and be strong minded.....he isn't worth it. Ruthy

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 14 July 2009

This is very sad, and so honestly written it strikes the heart. 10+

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Dani Moore 13 July 2009

this one really touched my heart it was well writen and very thought out great job

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Melanie Guerrero 13 July 2009

no qas one them thinq u read & get the goosebumps

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Kee Thampi 13 July 2009

this poet really fill our hearts i was the only brown one you called me your little bear.. but now you gone forever left with no signs

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Ritty Patnaik 13 July 2009

steve, i can see your hurt.it happens to allof us that we lose our dad and mom at one point of time.a good bye might look like a final parting, in physical sense.but in reality, the soul never dies.it takes another form.so youshould think your dad is some where, still loving you and taking care of you.i found it a loving poem, for your dad.thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 12 July 2009

at times even one goodbye..symbolises a glint of hope a goodbye is much better than 'no' goodbye!

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