Good-Bye! Poem by Steven Pimentel

this is a heartfelt poem, because i've seen the damage that can be done when that happens. i have a poem on line called 'a dad' which you may be able to relate to this. but you put good feelings into this write. very good

He missed a good thing, your dad, someone very special....you! His loss! Don't look back and regret, always look forward and be strong minded.....he isn't worth it. Ruthy

This is very sad, and so honestly written it strikes the heart. 10+

this one really touched my heart it was well writen and very thought out great job

no qas one them thinq u read & get the goosebumps

i am enjoying my time while going through your poems.....this poem was touching! ! i give it10

yeah.//... your poems are sort of very poignant indeed.. you keep that aspect through out.. nice reading your poems.. i ll see you soon with love shan

You had a dad Who showed you love And did not hide It is the care we show The love we say we have When alive which matter More than the goodbye His blessings will stay Forever with you! Angel

a touching poem....and you expressed it will your love to your Dad...nice write...10 (see my poem ' Always ' let me see if it will touch your heart too)

A lesson in this too. Life's teaching us....constantly. Cheers. Subroto