Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Good Bye Comments

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This day I was wearing black, Him,
His good bye was long and short,
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Nelly Holch
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Nelly Holch 07 July 2009

number one chas. I didnt write it it was my mom who wrote that. two.anybody could say that. be a little constructive.AT LEAST. and the chess game....its for that little guy called Axel that left me, for a piece of leather. ok? I wrote that in 4th grade. *similarities of names and history in this argue are just pure coincidence* unless you are that guy named axel that left me for a piece of leather

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Nelly Holch 07 July 2009

lol, my mom is a great person....she had to go through a LOT of hard stuff and often....the only way she could know she could get through it...was by writing poems.that let her the right way. I think she wrote it when she had a lover....she was going to get married, so she gets away from the suffering she was in..then she said no..and everything lighted up...but it was hard to say no, and to move on...but she did. and now..here we are my stepdad. me my sister and her.

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