Good Bye + Comments

Glory unto smile and sorrow And to God too Let it be vibe bon voyage 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

this is nice............ excellent.

From the Heart a Perfect 10

This is such a beautiful poem....a very touching good bye...10++

Let sweet memories Wet our heads whiles sorrowful Tears bounce off our face If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry The sad song good bye. It was a sweet n yet sorrowful gdbye but still love is in there I love tis last few sentence best. the...sad song....gdbte

Let all mortal souls take note Whiles tears water like rain..... let everybody take note but tears should not role out.. it will bring shame..... lovley write andbeautiful theme....10 read mine cry not, , , , , butterfliesaround marry to marry and miss i miss u

Your last three lines says it all! ! ! ! a ten from me.

A spiritual and deep felt intimacy. I wonder if we really say good bye.

wow this is such a heartfelt poem Eyan...wish i could borrow this poem someday! ! !

i felt it.....really touching 10/10

The saddest word 'Goodbye' in the heart vocabulary. You spelled that warmly.

An excellent write, reads like a dedication of deep respect..wonderful imagery

you visualize the scene very well, your usage of clear and vivid images is powerful and the words you chose are just perfect, the poem flows smoothly, really simple and deep

i have to close my eye, just to see you; i have to keep my wings for you to fly... i have to hold my breathe just to let you live....all are just an entity to remember of your poem....excellent lines that create your wonderful poem....you shared rainbow to our lives.....thank you...a 10 + for you...

'If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry'...if this is true then many hearts wouldn't cry....nicely penned...

WELL PENNED! WE ALL HOPE THAT AT THE END, GOD'S LOVE SHALL GIVE US SALVATION AT OUR DESTINY'S END! A 10! -Raj Nandy

this is a excellent dedication to MICHAEL JACKSON. although it may not have been written for him. A DOUBLE TEN

Brilliant work. I loved the emotion.

I loved it my fave part was the ending its so true to me anyway

great poem its really good 10