Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Good! ...... Bad! ..... Who Knows? Comments

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Kitty, stealthily working towards a target, from the ground
Squirrie on the tree, knowing what he is up to,
enjoyed a mango, exercising caution to the dot
and notices Kitty's moves accurately
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Curtis Johnson 17 July 2015

Hi Jayatissa. Thanks for reading my poem, cat And Squirrel. How interesting, our similar interest. I enjoyed reading your poem which showed great imagination, and kept me anticipating the outcome. Thank you. Curtis

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Uma Ram 20 April 2015

Awesome sir. Really could n't control my laughter after loooooooong! Thank you sir for takingus back to childhood days' fables...lovely, enjoyed it truly sir. Thanks for sharing... Great escape, it is..............How are you feeling today? ' 'Good! ..... Bad! ...... Who knows? ' REALLY BEAUTIFUL LINES SIR.

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Thank you Uma for your frank feelings and kind words. Let me read yours too.

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Bri Edwards 15 January 2015

Hi... Squirrie........ Enjoying a mango.... eh? ..this line made me laugh out loud! [Hmmm.......Hmmm..... Squrrie answered carelessly Are these mangoes good? Kitty did not give up Good! .... Bad! ...... Who knows? Munching a mango bite, replied Squrrie..................... i would have sent a message; PH says you don't accept messages. you left an i out of Squirrie's name twice here and at least one more time later. i'm loving the story so far. :) ] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [In fact I thought leg was broken. Fortunately, it didn't. But, still it hearts.].........see the typo? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - thanks for the poet's note! i've heard real life stories of things, which were at first thought to be misfortunes, turning into 'fortunes'. nicely done; thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Sana Ghostana 19 August 2014

I really like this story! It's cute, whimsical, and amusing but also tells a story a gives a good lesson. An excellent fable you tell! -SOH

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Chuy Amante 17 June 2014

A Buddhist Squirrie & a Buddhist cat now what do I think of that? I love the perspective, it fits all well much better than Heaven or Hell

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Chuy Amante 17 June 2014

A Buddhist Squirrie & a Buddhist cat now what do I think of that? I love the perspective, it fits all well much better than Heaven or Hell

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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