Monday, February 17, 2014

>≫≫Good And Bad Are Illusions Comments

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I take a hammer and use it excessively
On a plate of reality, the plate gets fragmented
The fragmentation is an illusion
And i am trapped in it
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Abdul Wahab
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Shahzia Batool 23 March 2014

concrete images are used for abstract suggestions...good work!

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Shania K. Younce 13 March 2014

A very well write. Bien!

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Ruby Mostazir 02 March 2014

i really like the idea of hammer and plate....you hv written it so brilliantly. really good poem.... :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 March 2014

hammer is nothing but my thought Universe is one indivisible entity. Beautifully stated. Thank you.

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Tribhawan Kaul 25 February 2014

Nothing exists separately including good and bad And the hammer is nothing but my thought........beautiful lines. A philosophical poem. Very nice.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 February 2014

A great philosophical poem. We can always be good if we try. Nice to read yor poem again.

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