I take a hammer and use it excessively
On a plate of reality, the plate gets fragmented
The fragmentation is an illusion
And i am trapped in it
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i really like the idea of hammer and plate....you hv written it so brilliantly. really good poem.... :)
hammer is nothing but my thought Universe is one indivisible entity. Beautifully stated. Thank you.
Nothing exists separately including good and bad And the hammer is nothing but my thought........beautiful lines. A philosophical poem. Very nice.
A great philosophical poem. We can always be good if we try. Nice to read yor poem again.
concrete images are used for abstract suggestions...good work!