Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, November 27, 2008

Good And Bad Comments

Rating: 4.6

Good are the things
That are proved to be helpful
Bad are the things
That are proved to be harmful
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Asif Andalib
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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

Interesting poems.. An invoking way of defining 'Good' and 'Bad'.. Also God who takes part on it.. Beautiful..

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Elizabeth Mpanga 04 December 2008

interesting. nery intriguing

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Raj Nandy 04 December 2008

The concept put across in the poem is both interesting and thought provoking! Good deeds shall always out weigh the bad! -Raj Nandy

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Kresta Farr 02 December 2008

very well written with strength and belief behind it.

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Colin Jeffery 30 November 2008

Great poem that stirs the soul

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Angelo H.g. 29 November 2008

enjoyed this poem very nice write!

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Adeiza A. 29 November 2008

Cool poetry...quite religious too.

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Brittney Karasek 28 November 2008

very very interesting.... good job.

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Hi Asif! I was honored to comment your poem. I think you are right in a half way. But you have made a great job. Congratulations!

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Josephine J.W 28 November 2008

Hmm...an interesting philosophy.

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James Roberts 28 November 2008

oNE MANS MEAT IS ANOTHER MANS POISON A VERY INTERESTING AND BELIEF CHALLENGING POEM GAURANTEED TO MAKE YOU THINK ABOUT THE BASICS OF rELIGION/PHILOSOPHY JIM

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Charmaine Sinclair 28 November 2008

Although I do not have belief in God, some features of good and bad are very well defined in your poem, in a way that any could read and understand- something that is always too underrated.

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Catrina Heart 28 November 2008

Food for the soul... sush a wonderful piece to share about God, the balance of life and with a fine touch of religious advice...so true! God bless you and this piece, a 10.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 November 2008

The concept/philosophy that you share in Stanza 2, is intuiging...The piece itself, as a whole, is unique, as it rings of a parablesque style...I like it...IIT IS GOOD...NO WAY BAD! ! ! Solid Work, Asif. FjR

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Min Sia 28 November 2008

I like the second stanza..thought provoking... In the whole..There's a philosophy in it..everyone should know about... Great poem!

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Lee Crowell 28 November 2008

I like the last four lines. You might try reading my poem 'god poem'. Also, I wrote one about the death of Sadaam Hussein 'lead me up'

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Zaarah Jasmin 27 November 2008

inspirational poem, keep it up! i rate for these poem.

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Sid John Gardner. 27 November 2008

Please answer this Question Asif. 'Can anyone justify taking the life at random of innocent people because they do not wish to accept certain creed and way of life? '. Yes or no? Also do you think that it is possible for an individual to chose his own way of life and religion then live in harmony with others. Peace, Sid.

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Ramin Chaman 27 November 2008

a deep poem...very nice

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James Mclain 27 November 2008

Serious Old Testament reading yet I fathom not a reward for harming another...

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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