Good are the things
That are proved to be helpful
Bad are the things
That are proved to be harmful
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The concept put across in the poem is both interesting and thought provoking! Good deeds shall always out weigh the bad! -Raj Nandy
Hi Asif! I was honored to comment your poem. I think you are right in a half way. But you have made a great job. Congratulations!
oNE MANS MEAT IS ANOTHER MANS POISON A VERY INTERESTING AND BELIEF CHALLENGING POEM GAURANTEED TO MAKE YOU THINK ABOUT THE BASICS OF rELIGION/PHILOSOPHY JIM
Although I do not have belief in God, some features of good and bad are very well defined in your poem, in a way that any could read and understand- something that is always too underrated.
Food for the soul... sush a wonderful piece to share about God, the balance of life and with a fine touch of religious advice...so true! God bless you and this piece, a 10.
The concept/philosophy that you share in Stanza 2, is intuiging...The piece itself, as a whole, is unique, as it rings of a parablesque style...I like it...IIT IS GOOD...NO WAY BAD! ! ! Solid Work, Asif. FjR
I like the second stanza..thought provoking... In the whole..There's a philosophy in it..everyone should know about... Great poem!
I like the last four lines. You might try reading my poem 'god poem'. Also, I wrote one about the death of Sadaam Hussein 'lead me up'
Please answer this Question Asif. 'Can anyone justify taking the life at random of innocent people because they do not wish to accept certain creed and way of life? '. Yes or no? Also do you think that it is possible for an individual to chose his own way of life and religion then live in harmony with others. Peace, Sid.
Serious Old Testament reading yet I fathom not a reward for harming another...
Interesting poems.. An invoking way of defining 'Good' and 'Bad'.. Also God who takes part on it.. Beautiful..