Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Gone With The Wind... My Love Comments

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Gone with the wind... My love my love
Inner tornado's uproot my beating heart
Casting it aside into loneliness,
Feelings carving the painful lost memories
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Ken e Hall
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Patricia Grantham 15 August 2013

Love has taken a turn for the worst and can't be mended right now. Will take some time to mend after being torn apart. Strong winds will blow that only you and your lover will know. When you have time I invite you to read Lost and Found and If We Ever Meet Again. Enjoyed your write.

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Patti Masterman 14 August 2013

I hope this is only hyperbole. It is a very stirring piece. No one likes to play the fool, we always want to be the lover, or the hero..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 July 2013

I understand. Try Surprise Surprise when you have a spare minute. Best regards.

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

She languished in the portico of her lover tongue-in groove, archway of his desire- - Courtesy- Kristin Scott great lines hereby

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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2013

So much emotion written in every line, just dig the words and it still deep there...nice Ken, Luvli one_Soul

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

A fool in a fool's paradise is I my love. good quote Gone with the wind

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