Gone With The Wind Comments

the desire to touch the sky can not be blown up simply by wind. deep thought. try once more. with regards

deep thoughts, excellently written poem. Siya_! !

The wind in it's infinite fashion can pick up a seed and take it to a place far away from where it had originally fallen. So is it with our thoughts it can take us to lofty heights then set us in a a place of complete serenity. Very inspiring.

Sometimes we fall short of goals and desires. But one can still try. Brief, to the point and finely written.

nice write. very good title things get caught up in the wind

An eye-catching title, very poetically and intelligently used...with a change of your own style with a touch of newness to it...liked it!

Sky is empty space with particles floating. If hope is all the pace from earth to sky, some part is reachable, I hope. Thank you for a beautiful poem.

Such a deep thought said in so little lines, another well written poem.

Sometime our hope and dreams are gone with the wind but at least we have hope.

I like it. But you breathed it in. Trust me.

Full of symbolism and impressionistic imagery. Very much said, in very few lines. Sentiments.The lost feeling very present., the lost feeling in Time.

'Gone with the wind' is too far fledged from reality as the sky is still there and Valarie can still reach out in course of time. A fine and short poem from a poet standing tall over here. Fine sharing Valerie..

'Man's reach should exceed his grasp or what's a heaven for'? So don't worry even if you couldn't reach out to the sky! But hopefulness shouldn't be let to go with the wind! Enjoyed!