Friday, November 4, 2011

Gone With The Future Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everyday, I rise above my fears,
Looking down on my past fading like the sunset,
With everything I never had as a child.
The future opens her arms ready to embrace me,
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Ekemini Rogers
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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2011

Wake up! Now that you made your first move by posting this well penned and poignant write that has become your proud entrance into the Poetry World, there is no time to waste and keeping your fingers crossed, this is a NO, NO! There is a long path to travel through and you are young and strong, let's keep it moving ahead because where you are now, I was some time ago and where I am right now, I want you to come! 10+++God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! In Poetry Yours, Romeo from New York City! ...

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Dave Walker 04 November 2011

A great poem, a good write. May i invite you to read my Poem called, astral plane.

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