Gone With The Ferries (Villenelle) Comments

Ho Milica - A beautiful regal name meaning GRACIOUS. You have been very graciuos in sharing your poerty ans I am honoured to be the first to comment on this GEM. The VILLENELLE is a perfect poetic form in which to express the ephemeral beauty of FERRIES and the transient beauty of the garden. This - Milica is a PERFECT POEM. Verse One. The reality of the 'Ferries in your garden' laughing - playing - climbing trees - eating cherries - AWESOME. Verses two and three and four.. Lovely word-play and visual images - Rasberries - Strawberries - Angels - Displaying pure love and innocence - Hugging - Kissing - BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT. Verses five and six - 'You are nearer God's Heart in a Garden than anywhere else on Earth'. This is glimpe of Heaven - Milica - The Angels and the Ferries come and go but while they are there - and you really really see them - 'In my garden - heavenly messages conveying' You are BLESSED - AMAZING. I have read hundreds of poems on PH Milica - but this is the lovliest - reading it has lifted my soul to heaven. It is lovely Spring Morning here in the UK and as I look out of the window at my lovely garden - through the eyes of your poem - I caught a glimpse of the Angels and the Ferries - playing and laughing among the Spring Flowers and I too am blessed. Thank you for sharing and opening all our ees to the Spiritual Dimension. Love you in Poetry - JOHN .