Monday, September 12, 2011

Gone Too Soon... Comments

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Feel so helpless
That i am almost loosing my senses
There is just nothing that i can do
Then to watch you slip away, and pray that you will be ok.
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Jade Ali
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Lovable Wisdom 21 September 2011

beautiful nd so powerfully written

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Dave Walker 12 September 2011

A fantastic poem. Really really good. May i invite you to read my poem called, Child in your arms.

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