Saturday, December 31, 2011

Gone Past The Clock And Calendar Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are running against the time and the dates,
Clock keeps reminding three aspects of life,
Age, emotions and gains,
Age settings are default, it will always increase.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2018

Sometimes we run against our will, time and dates. But time has amazing effect in human life. Clock keeps reminding three aspects of life and these are age, emotions and gains. Visiting final place of life amazes mind. Birth and death both are truth. Life swings between birth and death. This poem has amazing vision within and this is brilliantly penned...10

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2018

Thank u so much Sir, your insightful comments are forever to cherish and preserve.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

Running against time! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Woru Sulyman 03 May 2016

great poem...deep with meaning.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2015

We are running against the time and the dates, Clock keeps reminding three aspects of life, Age, emotions and gains, Age settings are default, it will always increase. Emotions swing like pendulum between content and discontent Gains are our account Amazing poem, that's not only as a good poet but as a good Accountant as well.

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 November 2015

It comes a time in one's life - usually around the age of 40 (speaking about myself) when you start to realize, that all your life you've been trying to adjust yourself to the rhythm of this world, trying to be part of it, forgetting the magic of childhood years; and then, you can no longer do that - you feel to live and dance to the rhythm of your inner music. I can relate to this poem; it addresses the most important matters of life. A thoughtful write!

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T Rajan Evol 04 November 2015

Wonderful poem, beautifully explained Only the values I inculcated in my offspring is never ending reward for me so long they do good deeds. Take some time out and visit your final place of resting and find out how you see them from your world which digress you from the right path.

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2018

Thx Much TRE.....

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