Monday, February 28, 2022

Gone In A Blink Of An Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

One moment your right here beside me,
In a flash you are taken away,
I'm hearing your voice in my memories,
I long for you every day,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 June 2022

Simply worded, but briliiantly thought and CONGRATS on the MPOTD, dear Jayne, it's all about LOVE that exists perpetually

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Chinedu Dike 30 March 2022

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation..........

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2022

A beautiful poem of love. Very touching. Congratulations! !

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Jayne Davies 30 March 2022

So pleased to get POD! Thanks all for your comments x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 March 2022

Such a fabulous poem! Wonderful poetic expression...many congratulations! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 March 2022

Life is like this! One moment you are there breathing, talking and laughing. Next moment you are gone like the whiff of a thin smoke. Truly philosophical. Top score!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 March 2022

Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day, dear Poetess Jayne. Marvellous Poem

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Jayne Davies 02 March 2022

Many thanks for all your kind comments.

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Nabakishore Dash 01 March 2022

Thanks for your beautifully expressed platonic love poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 01 March 2022

Thanks for your platom

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 01 March 2022

A minute can make such difference. Fantastic poem 5*****

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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