One moment your right here beside me,
In a flash you are taken away,
I'm hearing your voice in my memories,
I long for you every day,
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Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation..........
A beautiful poem of love. Very touching. Congratulations! !
Such a fabulous poem! Wonderful poetic expression...many congratulations! !
Life is like this! One moment you are there breathing, talking and laughing. Next moment you are gone like the whiff of a thin smoke. Truly philosophical. Top score!
Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day, dear Poetess Jayne. Marvellous Poem
Simply worded, but briliiantly thought and CONGRATS on the MPOTD, dear Jayne, it's all about LOVE that exists perpetually