Wednesday, April 27, 2022

Gone Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

That day I wept,
I realised,
That your not coming back,
For grief is such an awful thing,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Davies 29 April 2022

Thanks everyone for your comments.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 April 2022

I hope you are alright but keep them in yr heart they'll be there forever Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 29 April 2022

Thank you LeeAnn x Yes I'm fine x And I so appreciate your comments!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

A poem that highlights the precious value of life.......Beautifully written Jayne.....10

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Jayne Davies 29 April 2022

Thank you so much for your lovely comment.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

Grief is indeed an awful thing it knocks you off your track....So true true.....

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 28 April 2022

Losing some one so dear and close to heart is indeed very painful, the best way to over come is to relive those good old moments and cherish them as treasures of life. A heartfelt poem. Full******

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Jayne Davies 29 April 2022

Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated.

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Richard Wlodarski 28 April 2022

A heart breaking poem that ends on an optimistic note. I'm betting that you would find some positivity in those moments that had been less-than positive.

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Jayne Davies 29 April 2022

Very greatful for your comments. Thank you.

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Nabakishore Dash 28 April 2022

Pathetic poem nicely written on account of losing some one who is dearest.

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Jayne Davies 28 April 2022

Thank for your comment. Really appreciate.

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David Wood 27 April 2022

There is nothing worse than losing the one you love.

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Jayne Davies 28 April 2022

Thanks David. Don't think it ever leaves you x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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