Star Dust

Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)

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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)

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Friday, November 7, 2008

Gone Forever Comments

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Light wants to come and take you away,
But darkness doesn’t think you’ll stay,
It thinks you’re too scheming,
But I’m not agreeing,
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Ershad Mazumder 13 November 2008

Very good feeling and expression. But you said more than the poem needs.Poetry is not prose.Do not say everything you feel.Keep something for the readers to think. A poem is shrouded.

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Star Dust

Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)

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