Sunday, November 22, 2015

Gone For Good Comments

Rating: 4.8

The night wears on
Not a wink of sleep
Smothered by thoughts
I can hardly breathe
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

It is a poem on love and pain with touching depiction. Beautifully crafted. The impressive lines are... When the days were long And the nights were filled With whispers and heart-beats But I know in my heart My longings are in vain Your voice is gone Gone for good. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 17 February 2017

I want to describe this poem with words like beautiful, lovely, and smooth but there is such pain and loneliness in this that I don't know what to do except give this piece a haunting night sky 10++++++++++++++++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2016

It’s your voice That can put my heart at ease A beautiful poem describing the voice that inspires to write a good poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Smothered by thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

hmmmmm... fading in night sky

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