Saturday, September 21, 2019

Gone Face Of The Valley Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing lonely beneath a tall and dense tree
Looking from the back towards her I crawled,
like an insect I had to dig the earth first,
and then I managed to crawl on the other side.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2019

A poem of great depth with a meaningful message. A powerful write.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2019

no Kashmiri shawl to hide the bleeding parts..../// oh! this line touches humane inner heart and bleeds continuously! and yeah we do still nothing for the world and contributed nothing to Earth! agree with Mr. Jason Benefield.

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Khalid Saifullah 21 September 2019

I agree with the comments of Jason Benefirld, yes. it\s an indictment on our time.

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