Sunday, April 22, 2012

Gone But Never Forgotten Comments

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darkness surrounds me I run in circles
yelling your name but you hear none
I'm told me your gone but I cant
believe such things I can feel
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Brittney Miller
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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 01 October 2012

This poem is more universal, i like the way you have kept it short and yet very appealling... You have managed to take the reader into your imagination and left them at that place where they will have to choose what they want the poem to mean to them... Coz everyone has at some point in time lost someone important to them and the last two verses makes pple to think about that special person and smile, though they are gone! ! ! great poem! ! !

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