Friday, December 12, 2008

Gone Bad Comments

Rating: 5.0

On this gray day I'll say that today
No need to lie, just say goodbye, I won't cry or sigh
Stay away, our love like dried up clay, total dismay
I feel weak, my eyes leak, no words to speak, trying to be meek
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Izik Alcox
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 December 2008

A moving poem, touches the heart.Beautiful rhyming scheme throughout.Good job Izik!

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Ashlea Pearson 12 December 2008

I really like your style of writing, it's unique. This one is one i will replay on my mind.

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James Mclain 12 December 2008

Wow you to are rockin wit this also swell dont you yell>Thanks..

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