Friday, December 2, 2016

Gone Away Comments

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I am gone away to my island
gone away to my jungle home

there is no one here to vex me
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 05 December 2016

A longing to get away from the hassles of life is a common one for poetic souls. Island as a metaphor for death or isolation is a great idea. Liked. A10

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Barry Middleton 05 December 2016

Thanks Nosheen. I associate the tropics and islands with Eden, a paradise on Earth. Something we lost and will likely never find again. Of course part of the island idea is mental.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 02 December 2016

A excellent write deserving the full marks 10.

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Barry Middleton 02 December 2016

Thanks. Although I am a hermit, I appreciate praise.

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