Monday, November 3, 2008

Gone (A Tribute To Those Who Graduated) Comments

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The final days are looming, everyone's hearts are booming,
it's that time of year again,
To farewell the kids who made it through, through the old and through the new,
and survive to see it then.
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XxAmieLee xX
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Blue Eyes 15 November 2008

i truely love it.it is very nice poem, but i have one thing that i think it would be better if changed everyone's heart is booming

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Yes Amie Lea another chapter in the lives of the graduates. Your poem gave a sincere message for their new journey. Thank you for sharing it. Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 03 November 2008

Amie, bidding farewell to senior fellows after a very long association is really a very touching and emotional moment. Your tribute to them beautifully sums up the long journey and bids them farewell in befitting poetic style. Well done, keep it up. CP

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