Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kiss him tenderly
His dry lips cool against mine
He has left this world.
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Kim Schilling
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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 August 2008

....fine indeed......10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2008

You are great in telling tersely Shanmugam Chettiar

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Bill Smith 15 August 2008

much said in few words, liked this

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Fay Slimm 15 August 2008

Kim this an epitomy of the short line speaking volumes. It well deserves ten. Well done. Fay.

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Gloria Wekesa 15 August 2008

i love it short but carries all the feelings you are having. a great loss i love it.your work is great.

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Kim Schilling

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