When i'm gone
Will you miss me
Will you cry for me
When i slit my wrists
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This is a great poem but you can expand this, I think if you give this one another shot and write some more, it would be even more impressive.
YES! ! ! i do miss u and i do cry and so help me if u kill urself, aaaaaaaah, te chingare! ! !
this is a great poem.... simple words..i like it